I really liked this prose, it was hypnotic and surreal, but I didn't get lost in it once. The constant sensory abuse was great as well, felt like I could smell the rank of the field, see the hole, and hear the droning of the cicadas. Very relatable story seeped in your own kind of absurdism and madness.
Strange and thought-provoking. Well done.
Thank you. I appreciate your comment.
I really liked this prose, it was hypnotic and surreal, but I didn't get lost in it once. The constant sensory abuse was great as well, felt like I could smell the rank of the field, see the hole, and hear the droning of the cicadas. Very relatable story seeped in your own kind of absurdism and madness.
Thank you for reading. Glad you heard the Cicadas and smelled the rot. Seems it worked well.