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Suswati Basu's avatar

I pay the price

for an unasked birth.

You pay the price

for an unwanted revenge.

I feel these deeply.

Zerenner's avatar

Love the entropic enjambment, and also how you weave in this almost chthonian narrative amid the dark imagery.

For some reason gave me a Hades and Euridice vibe--almost like an inverted creation myth.

A fine addition to Substack's repertoire of darkness.

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