Such a dope piece. This very much an epic poem. Something scrawled on stone walls by observers. The descriptions where concise and punchy, but I almost wish that ones the proceeded the deaths where a little more drawn out. That is a me thing.
These hit that itch of old legend for me. I love it.
Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate them, especially since I know your work.
I read the work several times again and understand what you mean. Your wish is worth having in mind for the next round of editing. I would love to show it to you when I work on it again, before it goes into a chapbook.
echoes in monstrous caverns.
This is mythic. Like a downward spiral that somehow twists you back up again. 💕
Such a dope piece. This very much an epic poem. Something scrawled on stone walls by observers. The descriptions where concise and punchy, but I almost wish that ones the proceeded the deaths where a little more drawn out. That is a me thing.
These hit that itch of old legend for me. I love it.
Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate them, especially since I know your work.
I read the work several times again and understand what you mean. Your wish is worth having in mind for the next round of editing. I would love to show it to you when I work on it again, before it goes into a chapbook.
loved this, I loved the gods and their voices and deaths, this is really interesting and gripping
Thank you Aurora. If I ever manage to make a chapbook from this, I’ll make sure to send you a copy.